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May 12, 2012
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot ELPH 100 HS
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
800
Date Taken
May 12, 2012, 9:14:56 PM
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Microsoft Windows Photo Gallery 6.0.6001.18000
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4mm
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MizMaxter Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Is she clutching her belly for some reason? She's got a cute face, so I think you did well with that. And the ink lines are becoming much more steady, so you're definitely improving.
The only thing I feel like I need to point out is that your drawings still seem a little... well... messy. And I think it's largely due to the style of shading your using. It looks like you're shading with pencil then using a shader stick to smudge it or blend it? And I just think that manga/anime shading is much more crisp, clean and defined. Plus it smudges outside the lines of the character. But other than that, I'm really impressed with this drawing and all your latest work, so keep it up!! :thumbsup:=D
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ChazzVC Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yeah i started using 2b lead, looks like its having a negative impact on the shading here :nuu:
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MizMaxter Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, well maybe just making the distinction between dark and light shading would help too.
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